ok, my friend tard and my other friend seitter think they're gonna form a metal band, called Metal Men. Now allow me to tell you why they're wrong: well, they dont have a lot a talent, which can be fixed, eventually they'll probably be pretty good, but just musical talent can't carry a band, you need to know how to write music and lyrics. Unfortuately they cant do either. I'm pretty sure they're not profiecent enough to write guiter/bass/drum parts yet, and that's ok, but i've seen their lyrics and after reading them i nearly laughed my balls off. I've seen rappers and boy bands with better lyrics. If they're really serious about it they should bring someone in just to write, cause they obviously can't. If you want to see they're official website its www.maxpages.com/metalmen go there and see just how horrid their lyrics are.
June 26:
The Metal Men have new lyrics up, again written by seitter, and called To Be Like This. Seitter's second attempt at writing lyrics is much better than the first. Hell, I'll be the first to admit that it was a good, if not slightly cliched, idea for a song, and Seitter nearly wrote a good song about it. Unfortunately he comes up just short. The lyrics in some places flow together well, but more often they are just confused. There is much improvement shown here, but Seitter, you still have a long way to go.
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