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Illusion
Masking myself,
transforming myself,
to be?
Ideals not too high...
but still feel impossible.
Simple structure,
paint a picture,
of life?
Slowly dissappearing...
but sometimes struggling to appear.
by
Omar Farid
1.Your words boil my blood;/pressure in my throat/rising high/NO,I wont cry
2.You blame my exsistence/scorned by your love/I act imbevalence/you`re the only one
3.Hate the one that loves/love the one that hates/everything is backwards/love being pained
4.It`s just a game/you like to play/a Prisoner /of own hate
5.Hurt me hard/deep inside/out ripped my heart/just to see it`s bloody beat/in front of your feet
6.Now the vail is lift/the fool was I/to think...
7.You blame my exsistence/I act imbevalence/Scorned by your love..../you`re the only one
by Verica
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