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The Sequal
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| The Sequal (Dun dun dun!!) |
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| Okay okay okay!!! Yes, I know there is not a sequal (yet, maybe, hopefully), but here is my idea, see. Here's a preview: About an hour later, everyone was in the shelter they had built in case anything got bad. Strong winds were blowing outside, and it had started to rain. Lightning flashed as Mac came up to Ginger and Rocky. "We need you to go around the island and see if anyone is still out in the rain. Do you think you could do that?" She asked. "I think we can handle it," Rocky said. "What do you think?" "Let's go," Ginger said. She grabbed his arm and walked out of the shelter. They had gotten on Rocky's bike and were having one last look around. The wind had become very strong and the rain was pouring down so that it was hard to see. It had become hard for Rocky to pedal, and the tires were slipping on the mud. There was a steep cliff next to them. "We can't ride anymore!" Rocky shouted over the howling wind. "We have to try and walk!" "How? The wind is blowing too hard!" Ginger yelled. "We'll have to try!" The two deserted the bike and walked against the wind. The mud was slippery under their feet, and Rocky almost fell. Suddenly, he tripped on a rock and slipped over the cliff. Ginger reached out and grabbed his wrists. "Hang on!" She screamed. She tried to pull him back up, but she too was slipping on the mud. Rocky's feet thrashed wildly for a foothold but felt nothing but air. The rain made it harder and harder for Rocky to hang on, and Ginger's feet were slipping. Ginger suddenly slipped on the mud and came crashing down on Rocky. Rocky and Ginger fell down into the icy cold water below the cliff. It went up and down Rocky's body like toothpicks pricking his skin. "Rocky!" Ginger shouted. It seemed as if she was miles away. Rocky looked over to where she was kicking hard to keep her head above water. He tried his best, but could barely move. Ginger reached out a hand, and he reached for it, but the current pulled them in different directions and he could not reach. Rocky could no longer feel anywhere below his shoulders. He fought viciously to keep his head above the raging current, but his numb body made it difficult. He thought he could hear someone far away... A far away voice... Then the world went black. But of course, I have some comedy in it too. This is weh the chickens start to worry about them: Back at the island, the chickens were getting worried. "Ok, people. Last time Ginger was kidnapped, we panicked. Now Rocky's gone too... So we must stay calm... Deep breaths..." Bunty said. Then everyone started to scream. "Quiet! Quiet I say! We have to be a team, what what! Back in my RAF days, we would never be caught panicking!" Fowler said. Everyone kept screaming, and Fowler was trying to quiet them. Kara was standing off in a corner, Flip not far away. She was suddenly struck with an idea. "Everybody! Shut your pie holes!" Kara screamed at the top of her lungs. Everyone stopped in mid-air. "I don't like pie," Babs said. Kara ignored her. "We have to work together! Does anyone have any ideas?" "Maybe they went on holiday," Babs said, working on her latest knitting. Everyone gave her a look. Flip snickered. Oh, yeah, and Flip is Kara's friend. Kara is *hee hee* Rocky and Ginger's kid. I'm thinking in the end, I might hook 'em up. What do you think? ;-P Chocks Away! Maria
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