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| REYVEN- PART ONE |
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| “I am dying…” Galdar was the mentor in Reyven’s life. He was the only person who gave him advice. Reyven was rebellious, but whenever Galdar gave him instructions, he would follow them. He snapped into line whenever Galdar was around. Galdar was also his trainer. Without Galdar, he could not perceive what it would be like. Now, he had learnt that he would not have him any longer. “What is it, Galdar?” “It is a ki disease. A type called Chentusai Bloudas.” “What does it do?” “It lowers the ki, and when you get to zero… well, you die.” “How much do you have left?” “Ahhh… I don’t know. 2000 max.” Reyven closed his eyes, and tried as hard as he could to not cry. “There is only one way, that I’ll ever come back.” “Wh-hat is it?” “As I have (cough)… taught you… the dragonballs can… not revive people who have died by natural causes…” “Yeah, but a disease counts as a natural cause.” “If you… kill me, you could… gather… drraaaagonballllsss and (cough) reviiiivve meeee…” Reyven picked up his scouter, and pointed it at Galdar. “No way…” He stared, with tears running down his cheeks. “Hhowww muuccchh?” “1300, 1200, 1100, 1000, 0900.” “K-kill me!” “I-I can’t…” “Use the attack… that I taught you.” He wanted to say so much, but couldn’t think of anything. He looked again. 400, 300, 200… “You can’t make me do this…” 100, 80, 70, 60, “DO IT!” 50, 40, 30. “No…” 20, “NOW!” 10… “God damn you for making me do this… God damn me for doing this to you… GALDARAT…” He pointed his hands at Galdar and released all the energy into a focused beam. It killed him on impact, and he bowed his head in respect. “Goodbye old friend.” -------------------------------------------------20 Years Later----------------------------------------- “And we have a new tournament this year, one of the greatest lineups ever in any Tenkaichi Budoukai…” The crowd looked on as the announcer began to speak again, “First off we have… Tienshinhan, the three eyed wonder… against, Krillin, the powerful human!” the crowd cheered, and then the next match was announced, “And next we have, a real thriller… Goken, the young teen named after Goku’s son, Goten, who is not actually related… versus Gohan! The real son of Goku.” The crowd erupts as signs are raised. A chant upstarts for Goku’s match. “And… Goten the other son of Goku, the half Saiyan, half human… against Piccolo the green skinned Namekian!!” “Pi-cc-olo!!! Pi-cc-olo!!” The crowd chants, as he is shown on the monitor, training. “And after that… Trunks the son of Vegeta… will fight the Master of The World… MR. SATAN!!!” The crowd yells, and screams until they show him on the huge monitor. He is holding a large wad of cash. “And after that, we’ll have non stop action, with… Ristat, the trained Saiyan fighter, versus…” The crowd paused, and they break into curious wonder, as they guessed who will fight the almighty Ristat. “GOKU!!!” He yells, and the crowd screams… “YAAAAHHHHH!!!” The heat increases, as the jumping of the crowd electrifies the arena. And, in an all human battle… “Chao-Zu, the little clown boy… will fight… YAMCHA the human wonder!” The crowd stops. These are obviously not fan favorites. “Then… Nario master of the Fugmaha attack will fight… Reyven, the skilled young virgo with an unknown ki.” Another unknown battle. Nario was a horribly good fighter, and Reyven was also very good, both had won many tournaments. “Then, we have the last two contestants… ORION the super powered Hunamarian, who will fight, the Saiyan prince… VEGETA!!!” “And now… TENSHINHAN!!!” The crowd erupted as the first contestant walked down to the ring. He stepped over the ropes and posed in the ring. “AND THE OPPOSITION… KRILLIN!!!” Krillin walked down and the crowd still erupted. Krillin walked up to Tien, and said… “You ready to lose, Tien?” “Ha! In your dreams, Krillin.” “GO!” Tien rammed himself into Krillin, sending him back to the ropes. Krillin bounced back, only to be hit with four punches to the face. Tien kept his punches up, hitting the chest area, and the face of Krillin. “Aaarrrgggghhh!!!” Tien turned with a roundhouse kick, but he realized his kick went to high to hit Krillin. He started to bring his leg down, but Krillin took advantage and threw Tien by his leg. “Ka Me… HA ME HA!” A blast shot out of Krillin’s hands, and Tien fell back, to the ground. He looked up at Krillin, and knew he had one chance. “SOLAR FLARE!” The light blasted at Krillin, but he was aware that Tien would do this, so he bent his head down. The flash came off of Krillin’s shiny head, and went right at Tien’s eyes. “AARRRGGGHHH!!!” This moment, would be in Tienshinhan’s mind for the next couple of years. His eyes focused, just to see, Krillin jumping up, with his arms raised. “And the winner by knockout… KRILLIN!!!” The crowd got on their feet and clapped and cheered, for the first hero of the day, and the many that would follow. Next Goken and Gohan came down, together. They both stepped up to the ring, and they bowed in respect for each other’s abilities. “Let’s go.” “GET READY…. FIGHT!!!” Goken hit the first punch, with amazing speed, leaving Gohan on the ground, with blood on his face. Gohan flipped up, in his fighting position, and then leapt to the air. “Ka me ha me… HA!” the blast flew down at Goken, enveloping him in a tight shell of blue fire. “That finished him off.” The smoke started to part, and then did, revealing nothing. “I didn’t mean to kill him!” “Like you could kill me with that!” Goken nailed him in the back twice, and Gohan winced in pain. “SHADOW KICK!” Goken lifted his foot in the air, and whacked it down onto Gohan’s back. Then another foot appeared and did the same thing. And soon four had done it. Five. Six. Seven. “Enough! I submit.” “Good. That is my finishing maneuver.” “THE WINNER!!!! GOKEN!!!” The crowd yelled and cheered, and screamed, as Goken and Gohan left the arena. “Wow! What a grand match! Well, on to the next match!” Goten and Piccolo entered the arena separately, and it took them five minutes to finally get in the ring. They both stretched, Goten kicking into the air, and Piccolo stretching his arms. “FIGHT!” The battle began. Goten flew at Piccolo, ramming him back into the ropes. Piccolo bounced back, and ducked from the next two punches. He did an uppercut, and then shoved him onto his back. Goten flipped up, and shot his hand into Piccolo’s face. He rapidly released punches and kicks. Then he backed off and screamed “MASTER JUMPING KICK!” His foot shot out at Piccolo so fast, that Piccolo couldn’t see him at all. Then, the kick hit again, and again. Piccolo fell to the ground, and then jumped up with a kick to Goten’s face. He pointed his hands out, and let loose a ki blast, that knocked Goten on to his back. “Hmmm… SPIRAL BLAST!” He shot one blast, and then another, that spun around the other blast. Piccolo ran into the smoke, desperate to see if he had finished off his opponent. Little did he know, that Goten was already on the other side, as he had teleported, charging up for a Spirit Bomb. “Where are you Goten?!?” Goten didn’t reply, and just continued with his arms outstretched, pulling in the power of nature. Piccolo stumbled through the smoke, with his eyes closed trying to get to Goten. Goten thought and then realized that he needed ten more seconds. Nine. Eight. Seven. Six. Five. Four. Piccolo appeared on the other side of the cloud of smoke. “Where is the little punk?” “Errrgghhhhh….” Piccolo ran through the cloud again, to see Goten charging up. “No!” It was two seconds. He opened his eyes, and saw Piccolo rushing at him. “THERE! SPIRIT BOMB!” He formed a ball from the energy. And watched Piccolo freeze into position. “Triple Form!” He watched as Piccolo split into three Namekians. Goten released the ball, and it went flying at the three Piccolos. They all stood their ground while Goten’s spirit bomb blasted them. All three Piccolos fell to the ground. Not dead, but unconscious. “The winner… GOTEN!” “YAHHHHH!!! YEAH! YOU DA’ MAN GOTEN!!!” The crowd went wild, as he smiled, and left the ring. The medics came out, and carried Piccolo away, and pushed them into one form again. “COME ON DOWN…. TRUNKS AND MRRRRR SATAN!” The two came out, Trunks next to Mr. Satan, Mr. Satan with a pleading look in his eyes. He got in, and Trunks held back. Trunks then got back in. Trunks looked sadly, and then turned to the corner. “FIGHT.” Mr. Satan walked up to him and made a big punch, that really does no damage. Trunks falls down. And Mr. Satan counts. “Three more seconds…” Mr. Satan raises his arms, but when he turns around, Trunks is smiling. “I ain’t submitting. Not now, not ever again! KA ME HA ME HA!” Trunks sends the millionaire flying, and Satan lies on the ground, unconscious. “The winner…. TRUNKS!” Most of the teenage crowd goes wild, but the adults boo. “Here we go… RISTAT!” Ristat comes down, to an odd theme. The music in the background heated up the crowd, and soon, they were waving their arms around. He waited in the entrance way, showing off his muscles. His black robe flew around him, and his mustache gleamed a reddish brown. He removed his black robe, and then his Saiyan armor. He raised his arms, and proceeded down the entrance. He slided into the ring, and jogs on the spot. His black pants were seemingly still, but were really moving extremely fast. “And the winner of last year’s Tenkaichi Budoukai… Soooonnnnnn GOKU!” The crowd heated up even more. People yelled, screamed, and clapped, and used everything at their disposal to get the champs’ attention. He entered the ring, after slapping most people’s hands on the way in. He bowed and shaked Ristat’s hand, and they get into fighting positions. “Reeeadddy?!? GO!” Ristat charged at Goku, his hands enveloped in blue flame. Goku jumped, but was hit in the back, and then dropped onto the floor. Ristat grabbed Goku’s legs and pulled them, which causes Goku to be flung into the air. Ristat went up after him, and then teleported behind him. Goku caught a punch in the face, and then a knee in the gut. Goku’s eyes widened, and his mouth opened, as Ristat kicked again, this time, right in the jaw. With his concentration ruined, Goku fell back, clutching his jaw. “Fire punch!!!” Ristat flew down at Goku, and hit him right in the gut. Goku grabbed his face, and then looked at his hands. And he saw a liquid on them. He focused in, from the severe attack he had just received and noticed that it is his own blood, fresh from his head. He glared up, only to see a foot nailing him in the face, and he fell back again. Ristat raised his arm, and starts to concentrate. “Errrggghhh…” A disk is formed, by the energy he was gathering. “KI….EN…ZAN!!!” Ristat threw the disk, and the announcers teleport the whole battlefield out. “We are now watching, via satellites, the match, from our own private island.” The screen showed the kienzan glaring down upon Goku, when he ducked, and used his own ki to propel the disk at Ristat. Ristat ducks too, and they both started releasing ki blasts. Goku shot the blasts, as rapidly as possible, and so did Ristat. A spare blast nailed Ristat, sending him flying back into the wall. “KA… ME… HA… ME… HHHHHAAAAA!!!” Goku shot the glowing orange ball, and it connected with Ristat’s head, sending him through the wall. Goku walked over to Ristat, and stood above him. “Hmmm… better than usual…” “HYAH!” Ristat jumps at Goku, and blasts him back into the air. They throw punches as fast as they can, and soon they were not able to see the others’ punches, and just rely on instinct. “It is time to finish this, Goku…” “Yes… It is…” They both charged up for their finishing maneuvers. Goku tried to gather as much energy from nature as he possibly could. “Ahhh… the Genki Dama…” Ristat put his arms on his chest, and he began to glow. He then spread his arms, in a hypnotic fashion. Goku finally gathers enough energy, and releases it on Ristat. Ristat threw his attack and screams, “Portrait… of… fire…” Ristat and Goku’s attacks met each other, in the middle. Goku and Ristat both poured as much power as they possibly could. “Uhhnnn…” The two fighters fell to the ground, as the other’s attack, blasted them. Smoke arose, and nothing could be seen. “Umm… it appears… we may have a draw…” The crowd gasped, and then continued on watching the huge screen. The smoke began to part, and it only revealed two shadows, both still fighting. The smoke fully leaves, and only two shadows, are revealed. “Where’d they go? Where did the island go?!?” They burst up from the water, each pounding on the other. “THAT’S ENOUGH!!!!! ERRRGGGGGHHHH!!!!” Goku raised his arms and screamed. His hair grew taller, and turned blonde, while his eyes turned green. His gi began to rip, as his muscles bursted out. “So… you… are… Super… Saiyan??? I… am… honored…” Goku continued to pant, and then flew down at Ristat. Ristat put his hands out, and released his last blast, that contained his last energy. They both fell, and they zap back into the arena. “The next person to get up… will win!!!” Goku put his knee up, and then his foot. Ristat put his hands up, and then flipped into a crouching position. He lifted a bit, and he pushed, and he only moves a bit. Goku rolls over, and nails Ristat with a punch. Ristat returns the punch, again and again. Goku rose and grabbed Ristat. Ristat flung his fist into Goku’s gut, and then tried again to stand up. Goku put his hands on Ristat’s shoulders, and then flung him into the air. “Come on… Goku…” He put both his hands up, and then pushed with his feet. His feet wobbled, and then they straightened. “YES! I WON!!!!” The announcer replies, “Only if Ristat doesn’t land on his feet…” Goku looked up, and sees Ristat gliding down, and then he sighed. “C’mon…” Ristat pushed his feet out, and layed them both on the ground. His feet wobbled, like Goku’s but, in the end, they failed. He falls to the ground, unconscious. The crowd goes wild as Yajirobe and Orion get in, and give the two fighters senzu beans. They walk out, and Goku and Ristat shake hands. “Good match.” “Almost had me there.” “Well, the best man won.” “I’m not so sure.” “Until next time, Goku.” “Yeah, until next time, Ristat.” “WOW! That match is going down in our record books, as one of the top ten matches ever!!! And the next match, should also be a great match… heh… COME DOWN… CHAO ZU!!” The little clown boy came down with Tien and stepped into the ring. He waitedin the corner and then started to fly around the ring. Yamcha ran down, eager to fight Chao-Zu. “FIGHT!” Yamcha wasted no time and kicked Chao-Zu in the face. He used a roundhouse punch, and then stepped on Chao-Zu. “Souki Dan!!!” Yamcha gathered the amount of energy needed, and released it in a small pink and orange energy ball. He put his hands out, and began to control it. Chao-Zu finally got up, and jumped into the air. Yamcha’s Souki Dan soared after him, not letting him gain any time. Yamcha watched as Chao Zu came towards Yamcha, and then shouted, “ANOTHER!” He served another Souki Dan at Chao Zu, both nailing him in the back. “ARRRGGGHHH!!” Chao-Zu fell to the ground, not moving. He watched as the referee counted and then the announcer screamed, “YAMCHA IS THE WINNER!!! Now… The moment we have all been waiting for… the all Virgo match… REYVEN VERSUS… NARIO!!!” The crowd jumped up and down, and then slowed down. Nario walked to the ring, his beard hanging down, and his clean cut hair gleamed the perfect black. His white robe wrapped around him, and it almost covered his blue pants. He rolled into the ring, and tore of his robe. He then walked to the corner and started punching the turnbuckle. Reyven walked down to the ring, his eyes focused on Nario, and then he held back. His mind flared as he knew he couldn’t beat him. ‘no’ he thought. ‘one are so blind… as those who refuse to see…’His mind said and he thought back ‘Galdar?’ ‘Yes, Reyven…’ ‘What did you mean?’ ‘I mean see past your opponent, and his ki, see only the battle ahead.’ ‘Yes, sensai.’ He glared up and flipped into the ring. “HA! Pipsqueak. Pathetic weakling!” “FIGHT!” “C’mon… Nario.” “Errrgggghhh!!!” Nario flashed his maneuver at Reyven, but Reyven just held his breath. He ran over to Nario’s frozen body and smashed his gut. He let out his breath, and flipped backwards. “You cheap…” Nario ran at Reyven, his fist outstretched. Reyven waved his hand, and he appeared behind Nario. Nario smacked his elbow into Reyven’s gut, but it didn’t slow Reyven down. “FALSE MOON!” Reyven threw up a large amount of energy, and it took the form of a full moon. They both looked at it, and grew. “WHAT IS HAPPENING?!? THEY ARE TURNING INTO DRAGONS?!!!!???” They did just that, and appeared to be very large dragons. Reyven smashed his fist into the opponent, and then grabbed the nearest mountain. “We are now watching from our other private island, this wonderful match, via satellite.” He picked the mountain up and threw it at Nario. Nario bit onto Reyven, as the mountain collapsed on his back. Reyven grabbed Nario’s throat and flipped him over his shoulder into a nearby lake. They both dove into the lake, battling under water. The screen went blank as the announcers replied, “We are launching the nearest submarine, to show you this battle, under water. Reyven raised his hand and yelled, “GLADIATOR SWORD!!!!” A sword appeared in th dragon’s fist, and he slashed at Nario. It cut off Nario’s arm. “Hrrrraaaahhhh!!!!!” Then, Reyven generated a kienzan, and launched it at Nario’s gut. The screen flashed back on, and the sub recorded the match for the viewers. Nario’s gut slashed in half, and he shrunk into the normal Virgo he was at the beginning of the match. Reyven grabbed Nario and swam upwards, and then emerged from the water. “I WIN!!!” The crowd cheered as they saw the huge dragon shrink back to normal size. “AND NOW… THE SAIYAN PRINCE… VEGETA!!! VERSUS… ORION!!!!!” The camera shows the two fighting in the back. “AND THESE TWO ARE ALREADY GETTING IT ON!” Vegeta throws Orion into a locker and then locks him in. He powers up and blasts the locker twice, and then flies at Orion. “BIG BANG ATTACK!” He sends his big bang attack at Orion and it wipes him out. Orion had burns all over, and bruises on his back, and knee. Vegeta picks him up and then locks him in the next locker. He blasts the lock and leaves. “Well… ummm… Vegeta wins…” “YAYYYYY!!!!” The crowd goes wild as they await the second round. “Now… as most of you know, this Tenkaichi Budoukai is number thirty. That means this is our thirtieth anniversary. And for this special occasion, we will put all of the winners… into an eight man BATTLE ROYAL!!!” The crowd is stunned, and they all began to scream and shout. “COME ON DOWN!!!” Vegeta and Trunks walked down first, and they both levitate above the ring. Next Goku, and Goten come down. They all begin to stretch, as Krillin and Yamcha come down. Yamcha shakes Goku’s hand and then Krillin’s. He pats Trunks on the back, and wisely avoids Vegeta. “THE REST OF YOU… COME ON DOWN!!!” Goken comes down to the ring, with fire in his eyes, and glares straight at Goten. Reyven comes down with his sword, and lays it next to the announcer’s booth. “Now, all you have to do, is knock the other people out of the ring. GO!!” Goku and Vegeta square off, and bash eachother as fast and as hard as they can. Goku ducks a punch, and thenuses an uppercut to send Vegeta upwards and out of the ring. Vegeta stops in mid air, and Goku launches a kamehameha at him. Vegeta gets hit by it, and falls to the ground. “VEGETA IS GONE!!” Goken and Goten punch at eachother, nailing eachother backwards. Trunks sucker punches Goku from behind, and Goku falls out. Reyven jumps on to the turnbuckle, and powers up. He makes a swirling motion and then releases an electric bolt down on the ground. Next |
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