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This is a section where I'd like to put all my unfinished works. You may not be able to understand the whole thing yet because it's a second part to something else I haven't finished working on yet. Anyways, enjoy!

The next morning, Dumbledore calls everyone to the banquet hall led by the teachers. He looks incredibly grave and sad.
"I regret to inform you all that Hogwarts will be closing down. Properly for the death of little - and other grave news. Our Head Minister, Fudge, has joined Voldemort. The train will be picking you up tomorrow. That is all." Dumbledore walks down from the podium.
Harry screams in his mind, "That is all! That's it! I expected a grand speech!" No one in the whole dining room speaks. The tension could be cut with a knife. Then all hell brakes loose. The mass of students descend into chaos as the news sinks in. It is a mob that the teachers are powerless to stop.
Harry holds onto Ron, Hermione, and Neville as they try to escape the violent mob that is now tearing down the tables. DANGEROUS! They want someone dead, Harry can tell, it is only a matter of time. The four hold on to eachother as they try to get out of the mass of people when a voice shout out, "NOT SO FAST POTTER!!!"
Draco walks toward Harry with a group of his possy. "They want to kill me." Harry whispers to the other three. They continue on with the Slytherins following them. The mob becomes more violent. Harry can hear little first years scream with terror and howl with fear. The four Gryffindors fall out of the circle.
"GOOD WE MADE IT!" Harry shouts over the noise.
"WAIT!, WHAT ABOUT GINNY!?" Ron realizes with a dread on his face, "I HAVE TO GO BACK!"
"RON NO!!!" Ron throws himself back in the mob."Oh no! OH NO! What do I do now? ...now, now, now..."
Draco emerges. His mates follow behind him with Ron and Ginny held in their strong arms. Draco confronts Harry. Hermione and Harry curse and shout at Draco. Draco laughs and mocks them back. He says give himself up to Voldemort or you won't see your friends again.
Harry whispers underneath his breath to Draco, "You killed him, didn't you?"
"Me? Of course not, Potter. What do I look like? A dog?" His cronies laugh. Draco's voice turns into a growl, "And if I did Potter? What would you do about it?"
"I'd . . . I'd kill you back, I'd kill you back." Draco and the others laugh extremely loudly.
"AND YOU DESERVE IT TOO!!!" Neville screams over the now hysterical laughter.
"What's that Longbottum?" Draco muses Neville.
Ron and Ginny struggle and our subdued.
"What you say Longbottum?"
"You . . . You heard what I said . . . "
"Come closer Longbottum."
"Neville no!"
"No it's okay." Neville confronts Draco. "I'm . . . I'm here Draco."
"AVADA KADAVRA!" No effect. Draco then uses another curse and Neville is thrown 20 feet back. Hermione rushes to him. While she is away Harry is alone with the Slytherins. "Finally, the great Harry Potter is by himself."
Harry is extremely angry at how villainess Draco has become. "You know Potter, dad says you're the spitting image of your father. How am I not surprised, then, that you'll die the same way."
A group of Ravenclaws come up behind Harry. "HELP!" shouts Harry.
"Why? Can't the famous Harry Potter defend himself?" It's Cho.
"Cho?" Draco lifts his wand at Harry.
"A duel Potter? Using real curses?" The crowd hold its breath as Harry just stares at Draco.
"Are you crazy Draco?" The whole group laughs with amusement and start chanting.
"Awww, is poor little Harry a-scared of me? Boo hoo, now that he doesn't have anyone to protect him." Draco makes a fist at his eyes and wipes an imaginary tear. Harry could now tell that he would be killed if he didn't get out of this.
"Come on Potter, let's duel." Draco lifts his wand in the the starting position.
A chant radiates from the group. "Kill him. Smash his head. Spill his blood." It continues. Harry looks around for help. No one. "Kill him. Smash his head. Spill his blood."
"Come on Potter." The chant isn't so much a chant anymore, but a pulse. Someone was going to die. "Kill him. Smash his head. Spill his blood."
Harry lifts his wand, but too late. Draco fires a blast already and Harry is thrown against the Ravenclaws. He is thrown back in the circle. "Kill him. Smash his head. Spill his blood."
Harry restands with a bloody nose. Where's a teacher? Where's anyone? Only Ron, Ginny, and me.
Harry tries to fire another shot. Too late again, he is plastered against the ground, riddled in pain. His arm is broken. The girls gasp. "Kill him. Smash his head. Spill his blood."
Draco approaches Harry and stands over him with his wand. "Where's the great Harry Potter now? Where is he now?"
Draco fires the crucio curse at Harry. Harry shrieks with pain. "STOP! STOP IT PLEASE!" It's not Harry, but Cho.
"Shut up, girl." They throw her out of the circle. "Time to die Potter." "KILL HIM! SMASH HIS BRAINS! SPILL HIS BLOOD!" This time the chant is louder than ever. "Goodbye."
All of a sudden, all in the circle are jetapulted into the air and a high-pitched voice shouts, "WHO IS HURTING OUR HARRY POTTER? NO ONE HURTS OUR HARRY POTTER!" It's Dobby. He looks really flustered and winded. They land.
"You again, you stupid little house elf." Draco kicks Dobby away. But this time Ron lunges at Draco and starts beating him with his fists. However, the other Slytherins pile on top of Ron and Draco. Harry lunges at the dogpile as well. Ginny follows close behind.
KICKING! BITING! PUNCHING! SPITTING!
Harry kicks any flesh he can feel as he feels people kick back at him. He gets a good shot at someone's face and hears a cracking noise. All of a sudden he feels a hand grip his neck and drag him from the mass. It's Draco. His nose is smashed and blood covers his face like a mask. "YOU WILL DIE THIS TIME POTTER! AND ALL YOUR FRIEND'LL DIE AS WELL! ALL TOMORROW. . ."
Draco is slammed off of Harry by Cho. She bends down to Harry, "I'm so sorry Harry. I never ment it to go that far. I'm so so so sorry. . . . sorry, sorry, sorry. . ." She cries next to him. Draco crawls off elsewhere.
Hermione comes rushing to him. "Harry! Harry! Are you alright!? Where's Ron?"
"I don't know?" Harry immediately stands up and leaves Cho wailing on the ground. They search. For some reason the whole school has a white smoke in the air making it hard to see. The two get on their hands and feel. They finally find Ron cradling Ginny's lifeless body in his arms.
"Ginny, oh Ginny."
A man appears. It's Dumbledore.
Harry black out and finds himself in a bed, healed.
Harry is escorted back to the common room. It's closely guarded by four older students and two teachers: Hagrid, McGonagall. He quickly finds his friend, Ron, being spoken to quietly by Hagrid and Hermione. He approaches and sits down. After the others fall a sleep. He talks to Hagrid about all that has happened. Hagrid can't believe either.
"What's going on with Fudge, Hagrid?" Hagrid explains. Fudge turned traitor. The whole Ministry is an uproar.
Fudge declared his allegiance to Voldemort and said his secret army of fire-monsters will attack all who resist them. He attacked several wizarding communities in many countries including Britain and France in the attempt to take them over. (He does this on Voldemort's orders.) However, the muggles are still oblivious to anything in any country.
"Hagrid, where's Draco?"
"Lock'd away."
When they wake up the next morning everyone packs their belongings. And head down to the commom room. Filch walks in and alerts them that they should go down to the station. They head down the stairs escorted by four older students.
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Symbolism in my writings:

This is for me to describe what I wrote and what it ment in full detail. And it's also for my ego, I'm kinda' bored today. I reread my book 7 and enjoyed it thoroughly.)

Harry's vision:
Harry's first vision of flying represents goodness and love; love for nature. Then things go sour and he falls down to the earth. A stream turns to blood and Harry gets ash in his eyes and turns blind. This means that Harry has forgotten about the good and only knows evil now.

Who does Harry meet when he finds the rotting thing?:
The thing Harry talks to is a representation of the devil. He symbolizes the evil in all of us and what happens when evil wins out. Harry is the ultimate good in this encounter (almost a christ figure confronting Satan). When the rotting thing turns into him it symbolizes the evil in Harry himself. This whole relationship between good and evil may remind you of Simon's encounter with the Lord of the Flies in the book of the same name. Well it should! I liked the book, and it deeply affected both the way I think and write.
The same devil also screams at Harry after Voldemort is killed. Harry also killed the chaos of the devil and mans' heart when he killed The Dark Lord.

Why is Draco so evil in your writings?:
I don't believe Draco is truly evil. I think he's misled and hates the world because his life is crap. Harry is an example of a person who went the good way, and Draco the evil. Therefore, you could make a connection that Draco is sorta like Anikan Skywalker, consumed in the dark ways but actually coulda' been a nice guy if he was in a different situation. Harry is Luke Skywalker; overcame evil, beat it, was tempted, didn't fall for it.

What happened to Percy?:
Well, basically, Percy symbolizes someone who started out good, but his wantings to succeed so bad led him down the wrong path. (even to the point of killing his own brother!)
He represents mans' weakness of character when he'll do anything to please the person he thinks he needs to respect. (In fact, you should respect your parents more than your boss, releasing the devil in his heart.)

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