book 7 part 1 - my version - Books - http://maxpages.com/hpspeculation/book_7_pt

LAST PART EVER!
The full armies of Dumbledore are meeting at Voldemort's castle. Voldemort's castle on a jutting mount of land out of the ground. Dementors surround the castle as a shield and the rest of the death-eaters and other evil creatures (trolls, snakes, evil goblins, acromantula, centaurs, etc. bunches of demons and dark creatures). The leader of the army is a gigantic demon giant with piercing red eyes. A huge thunder cloud hangs over head and it appears to be eternally night. Shouts and screams from the hideous army reverberate through the environment, as do the building thunders of the storm.
Dumbledore's armies prepare to charge and meet Voldemort's armies head on. They line up to charge with Dumbledore riding a unicorn at the front. Harry will run to Voldemort's castle during the battle under cover of chaos. The storm picks up. It starts raining heavily. Big mud puddles appear.
Dumbledore gets his magical missiles ready to fire. So does Voldemort's army. Finally, Dumbledore's army gets ready to charge up to meat Voldemort's with Snape, McGonagall, and Lupin being three of his captains. Dumbledore gives one last speech, and they charge foreword. So do Voldemort's. As they run foreword both shoot off their missiles, killing fighters even before they meet. In the charge, Harry is shot down by one of these missiles. But he doesn't die. Ron quickly picks up the injured Harry and carries him towards the mountain. They are continually being fired at and they are shot down a couple more times until they finally reach the base of the jut of land Voldemort's castle is on. But this is still being guarded by thousands of dementors. They all approach Harry and Ron, and Harry is not powerful enough to stop there advance on his own. Right when they're about to get them, all the surviving members of the D.A. appear behind him and they all use they're Dementor spell and send the dementors flying apart and screaming.
Ron and Harry continue to move foreword as Hermione and Neville shout they're going to Voldemort's too. Ron and Harry refuse and they continue without them. (Harry finds out later that Hermione and Neville can't stand it and follow up after them a while later). All this is happening while the battle is going on.
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Harry and Ron start to scale the spiky mountain to Voldemort's castle at the top. The rocks are slippery and sharp, and it's hard to see in the rain. Many small waterfalls are pouring down the side of the jut of land soaking Harry and Ron, and making it hard to grip the rock. Harry encouraged Ron, and vice-versa. They are brothers. They love each other and wouldn't let one another down if they had one last breath in their body. Harry looked at Ron for a second. A gentle liking gently radiated from both of them. They continued on. Up the steep slope, up the terrifying dark, up the slippery mountain Ron and Harry climbed.
As they go up the slope, a slight terror creeps into Harry's heart. "I'm going to die. I'm never going to see my friends again." He forgets where he's stepping and slips and bumps his head on a rock. Things go dark. Ron shakes him awake. "Thanks" says Harry doubtfully. Ron fixes Harry's broken ankle with a spell and lifts Harry back up. However, the horror of the night has laid its seed in Harry's heart. Ron asks if Harry needs anything, and gives Harry one of his shoes because Harry lost one of his in the fall. They continue to climb on.
Harry continues to think as both Ron and Harry are soaked in the rain as they climb. "This is all so stupid. What's the point." Ron helps Harry over a small cliff. He licks his lips and helps Ron up after, roughly. Ron's foot is now bleeding heavily for lack of protection. He asks Harry if they can take turns wearing the shoe. Harry scoffs. "Why!? Do you have to fight a dark lord when you get to the top?" Ron says sorry and they continue.
Things only get worse as Harry's doubt turns to terror. "What am I doing?!! I'M GOING TO DIE!!!" He turns to Ron and weeps, "I'm going back." Ron says he can't. Harry shouts at Ron. "WHY NOT?!!!" Ron explains he has to kill You-know-who. Harry screams with anger towards Ron. "DO YOU WANT ME TO DIE?!!! DO HATE ME LIKE ALL THE OTHERS?!!!!!" Ron says no. Harry pushes Ron aside and walks back down the path. He sniffles in his shirt. Ron grabs Harry's sleeve, "You can't go back Harry." Harry punches Ron and the face and takes off running. He looks back to make sure Ron isn't chasing him and sprints right under a monstrous waterfall.
Harry falls and lands on a huge boulder sticking out of the mountain 4 feet down. Ron awakens him again. Harry and Ron are completely soaked, and Harry can barely talk he's so cold. Ron lifts him over his back, and carries him to a small cave-ish type indentation in the mountain. He wraps his cloak around him and Harry falls a sleep for a few minutes. When he awakens again, the battle is still going on down below. Ron is sitting next to him smiling. He has a small bloody nose but looks merry yet still pale with cold. "Do you need anything?" Harry says no, and sorry. Ron asks Harry if he's ready to resume or does he have to drag him the rest of the way screaming. Both laugh and continue up the mountain.
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Harry forgets about Voldemort and decides to concentrate on his parents. When they finally do reach the top they climb a dark winding staircase. Harry helps Ron up the rough bits. When they get almost to the top they hear voices. The two hide behind a small jagged peak and peer around to see who's by the door of the castle. It's a group of death eaters surrounding a small fire. They hear the death eaters talk to one another. Neither Harry nor Ron can tell who any of the death eaters are because they're wearing parkas. The leader of the death eaters is a tall skinny one with a whiny voice. They could tell none of the others took his words' worth beans. The rest of the death eaters were all large and spoke in grunting voices. "Well," said the lead death eater, "I'm going to go search." The head one wanders down the stair case and looks around.
Ron recognizes the whiny leader's voice. It's Percy's!!! They speak about it in whispers. Suddenly, a hand grabs Harry. It's one of the death eaters. Ron fires off a spell that hits the death eater in the stomach. He belches out leaches. Harry and Ron stand and start shooting off spells at the death eaters. The enemies are ready. One lunges at the friends. Harry kicks him in the face. The man screams and his blood runs with the rain down the mountain. Harry and Ron yell with war and fling themselves forcefully toward the remaining death eaters. They are hopelessly outclassed, but Harry shoots a blast up a death eater's head and out his brain. The man falls dead. However, the two last death eaters have Ron pinned. Harry blasts them away and Ron is left alone. He has several stab wounds in his chest. Harry runs to him and cries and cries and cries. Ron is delirious and shouts out random words. He is delusional and sees people who aren't there. Sweat runs down his face.
Percy runs to the bloody scene. Ron shouts with happiness. "Percy! Percy, you've come to rescue me!" He gets up and runs for Percy, "PERCY! PERCY!" Blood runs down his whole body but he has a huge smile. Percy stands still and firm. He brings down his parka so his face is showing and lifts his wand. "PERCY! PERCY! I LOVE YOU PERCY!" He fire off one single shot at Ron. It hits him square in the face and Ron flies 50 feet back and lands motionless by a cliff's edge. Percy walks slowly toward Ron. Harry can only sit motionless as he watches. A tear runs down his face.
Percy arrives at Ron's motionless body. He stands over him and points his wand at Ron. Percy fires another shot and Ron falls off the mountain. A horrible cracking noise reverberates through the wet environment. Harry gasps and runs to see where Ron fell. Ron is 30 feet down. A clear liquid comes out of his open head and turns red. His legs and arms twitch and then fall motionless. Harry cries and cries. "Why?" He sprints towards Percy.
Percy sees him and points his wand at him too. "The same thing will happen to you Harry! You little a**." Percy fires at Harry, but he lunges out of the way in time. Harry tears out his wand and fires at Percy. Percy crumples over and falls down the staircase to the bottom. He lays still.
Harry is breathless. It was complete, Percy was finally corrupted into killing his brother. Harry wiped his nose on his sleeve and stands. "I can't go back now." He walks toward the door slowly but falls over halfway in mourning. When he reemerges, he isn't tear-stained, but stronger. Harry comes to the huge door at the castle. It's made of a rusty black iron. Harry uses the unlocking charm on it and it unlocks. He opens it and walks in.
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Harry walks into the castle. Some creatures try to attack him, but he sends them flying. He approaches a gigantic chair facing opposite of him. It is a beautiful chair of gold, decorated with a large emerald snake on the back of it. He continues to approach through a long, dark hall with beautiful and gruesome ornaments lining the sides. When he arrives, there is a small 3-step staircase leading up to the chair. Harry shouts out a challenge to the unknown foe. This is when a violent melody is played on an organ Harry can not see. Someone stands from the chair but instead of Voldemort, it's Draco.
Nagini uncoils from around his legs and goes quickly up a spiral staircase out of sight.
Draco tells Harry he's been tricked, and Voldemort isn't even there. He laughs and taunts Harry, calling him a fool.
He walks up to Harry and flicks his nose and continues to talk to him sarcastically. Harry refuses to attack. For some reason, he can't feel emotions anymore. He is nothing. Harry is empty. There is no one there to love him anymore. He breaks down and cries on the red rug lining the floor. Draco taunts him and jeers, but Harry ignores him. Draco kicks Harry down the stairs, which gives him a bloody nose. Harry doesn't care. He is broken and can't be fixed. He's been through too much. Draco continues to kick Harry and yell cruel things at him. Harry still does nothing. Draco is infuriated. He takes out his wand and threatens death! Instead he uses the Crucio curse on Harry.
Harry squirms on the floor in pain. Draco only smiles and taunts him more. But then he does a very stupid thing, he starts making jokes about Harry's parents. Something inside Harry wakes. He feels his empty heart become warm again. Harry feels the love his parents had for him. He stands up and approaches Draco while Draco is still using the Crucio curse on him. Draco is frightened. He doesn't know what to do, and tries killing Harry with Avada Kedavra. It is useless. The killing curse won't work. He isn't powerful enough to use it yet.
Draco breaks down and falls down in front of Harry. He whimpers as tears roll down his cheeks. He tells Potter how much he hates him, and "How could you do this to me?" He blames everything on Harry. Draco ravels himself in the corner and closes his eyes. Harry refuses to look at Draco. Draco screams at Harry to kill him. He doesn't want to live anymore. Harry ignores him.
Harry sits down in Draco's chair and puts his head in his hands. Draco takes this opportunity to take verbal potshots at Harry. Draco still, however, refuses to leave his corner in fear of Harry.
Harry sits there for a long time, crying. However, after a while, Draco gains courage and restands. He walks over to Harry concealing a knife. Harry realizes something's wrong too late. Draco stabs him in the gut.
Harry becomes furious at his injury, and Draco's cowardice. He stands bleeding and flings himself at Malfoy. They have a fist fight, then a duel, then again a fist fight. Spells fly everywhere. Harry gets on top of Draco and starts punching his lights out, but Draco gets back up and starts doing the same to Harry.
Neville and Hermione walk in during this. They arrive in the castle from the rain and are filthy. At this moment, Harry gets flung against the floor and is knocked out. His lifeless body rolls out in front of Neville and Hermione. Blood drips from his mouth, nose, temple, and stab-wound. He is filthy with mud and dirt all over his face and body. In several spots he has burns from spell wounds.
However, Draco stands humped over, panting, also bleeding heavily, but victorious.
He takes this opportunity to call Hermione and Neville mudblood and lummox, and tells them what happened and what he did. Hermione cries and cries for her friend. Neville, on the other hand, charges Draco. He flings himself at him. Draco still overwhelms him and after a brawl gets on top of Neville, and repeatedly punches him in the face. Draco reemerges from the battle with Neville's head under his foot. Draco laughs at the filthy Hermione who now lays herself over Harry to warm him. Draco loses himself in his laughter, screaming out insults at them all. Hermione becomes infuriating without Draco's knowledge and charges at Draco like Neville at just done. This time Hermione gets the better of Draco, and Draco gets thrown to the floor and lies there, bleeding.
Hermione and the bleeding Neville run back to Harry. They try to wake him up, but they can't. When they finally realize he's dead, the situation becomes surreal. Hermione and Neville hug, and they fall down to the ground and weep. But then something happens, Harry opens his eyes. His mouth is so cut he can only try to mumble to get there attention. When he finally does, both Hermione and Neville cry in happiness and hug Harry.
Harry can't bring himself to tell them what happened to Ron. Though they do talk.
But then the unthinkable happens, a man strolls down the spiral staircase Nagini went up. A skinny man with a black cape, kinda man. It's Voldemort, followed by Nagini.
Hermione and Neville try to pick up Harry and escape. Harry refuses. All the while Voldemort hums as he strolls down the staircase. He's only a quarter way to Harry's level.
But Harry, with a new energy that arises in his body, stands up. He is still bleeding, but his wounds don't seem to bother him anymore. Voldemort says hi! to Harry in a cheerful voice. Harry then commences to talk venomously to Voldemort and orders Neville and Hermione to leave. Though, they refuse. While Harry shouts at the two to leave
Voldemort shouts at Harry to speak to him straight (he still is moving down the staircase). Meanwhile, Draco drags himself behind a chair out of harm's way.
Harry, quickly as to be a surprise, uses his wand to throw his two friends out of the castle and locks the door behind them. The fight begins. The last fight.
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