
09/11/04-
updated
09/09/03-
I probably won't be able to get book 7 up for a while still. probably about 2 weeks. Be patient, if you care...
02/09/03-
I'm really excited about the climax of book 7 in my versions so
I'm going to write it down first. Plus I don't want to forget it.
04/02/03-
I've updated it up so check it out!
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Voldemort suddenly bolts down the staircase and arrives at the ground level in seconds. He throws off his cloak as Nagini slides behind him. Voldemort laughs. He talks horribly about his father, Harry's father, and then finally Harry. All of his mass anger at everything and at everyone starts surfacing. As he talks about all that he hates and how it is all ending in this, his face gradually becomes more and more distorted into that of snake. He screams at Harry, a scream that would make any wizard flee, but Harry stands firm. Voldemort becomes more and more freaky as he talks. Until, finally, when he speaks of Dumbledore, he explodes in anger (not literally), and the whole room lights on fire.
Voldemort looks at Harry and the duel begins. Voldemort sends a constant stream of blasts at Harry as they duel, but Harry is hopelessly outclassed. As Voldemort pursues him, his snake, Nagini, slithers around the room after Harry also.
The battle continues with Harry eventually hiding behind a piece of furniture in the room. Voldemort looks around the room blasting furniture to pieces as he gives Harry the cat and mouse speech. But then it happens again in Harry's heart. He remembers his mother's love for him. Harry hates the idea of him dying a coward, and he stands and shouts at Voldemort to fight him. Voldemort's face turns into a snake again and he smiles. Harry hears something behind him! It's Nagini, she had snuck up behind! The snake prepares to strike, but Harry has enough time to blow out her brains.
But too late, Voldemort has already shot a spell at Harry. Harry is lifted into the air and is shot out of a door into the rain outside the castle.
He is bleeding horribly now as his wounds return to strength. His arm is broken and one of his ribs is broken as Harry drags himself further out onto a ledge. He discovers he is not the only thing injured, his wand is also broken.
Voldemort immerges from the door. It is raining so heavily, Harry can barely see anything. But Voldemort sees him.
Harry continues to drag himself when a lightning strike happens and he sees Voldemort. But too late again, The Dark Lord uses the Crucio curse on him and Harry crumples into a ball. Harry screams in severe agonizing pain. Will it end? Should I just kill myself? Voldemort approaches him and he can do nothing. The Dark Lord shouts out Dumbledore was wrong! Voldemort would kill Harry, not vice-versa! The prophecy had been fulfilled! He then talks about the waste of time Harry was, and how pleasurable it will be to finally kill him. You-know-who licks his lips in horrendous anticipation. Then something happens. Harry accepts it. He is suddenly relieved of all his pains. He finally feels happy! Harry is going to die! He is free! All Harry can do is smile as Voldemort approaches.
Harry blacks out.
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Harry is flying over a mountain! HIGH! HIGH! HIGH! The mountaintop is covered in snow and has a large waterfall in the beginning stages. Harry laughs! Hahahahahaha! This is so much fun! No pain anymore! FUN! FUN! FUN! Harry has no wings; he's just soaring over a tree-covered valley now. The sky is clear. Not one cloud, just a beautiful baby blue. The sun is overhead making the day hot, but not too hot. Just warm. WARM! WARM! WARM! This is so much fun! What? What's going on?
Harry heads for the ground. Down he goes! This isn't so much fun anymore. Oh no! I'm going to crash! Harry plummets for the earth below! The sky isn't blue any longer! It's blood red! Fireballs fall from the sky. A small stream turns to blood and all the trees catch fire and shrivel up before Harry's eyes. The mountain tumbles to the ground making a giant chasm in the earth. Harry can't turn back! FALLING, FALLING, FALLING! No turning back. NO TURNING BACK!!!! Who is Harry? He is a comet! Harry lights on fire! He speeds up! Zooming to certain death?
Harry lands. He is no longer on fire and still intact. No pain; no injury. He is sitting on ash; ash for miles around. A wind picks up. Ash blows everywhere. Some gets in Harry's eyes. It is a burning, no searing, pain. He crumples on the ground and wipes his eyes. No effect. He opens his eyelids! OH NO!!! Nothing! He's blind. Harry closes his eyes and falls into a sleep.
Harry awakens. The ash is now gone and he's currently sitting on dirt. He looks around. Same forever. And ever and ever and ever. Wait!!!! What's that!!? Harry can see something moving! He runs for it! HOPE! HOPE! HOPE! He arrives!!!
The most grotesque thing sits before Harry. A skinny thing covered in huge gaping wounds laughs at Harry. Its teeth and face are covered in dry blood. Maggots fester all over its body. The thing's eyes bulge with crimson, and its body is so skinny it looks as though it is about to fall a part. The smell! OH GAWD! THE SMELL! A horrible rotting flesh stink comes to his nose.
Harry vomits all over himself. He collapses in disgust. The thing continues to laugh!!! "Who are you, you silly little boy?" Harry doesn't answer, he just wobbles his head. "You are a silly, silly, silly little boy!" "You interfered with our fun, Harry. We wanted to have fun! We got rid of you, see? Do you see? We are going to have fun! Not you or anybody else can stop us!!! It's your fault, you know, everyone thinks youre batty. No one thinks your right. HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!"
"Who do you think you are? This is ours! All of it is ours! None of it belongs to you because everyone hates you. You just hurt, hurt, hurt. But we got rid of you now, for good. You won't mingle in our business anymore. Anymore, anymore, anymore! I HATE YOU!!! I HATE YOU!!!" It stops laughing.
Harry stands and looks at the thing. It is no longer a thing but an exact image of himself. He moves, the Harry image moves as well. Harry takes off running! RUN! Run for your life! An extreme terror comes over him. Panic awakes inside of him, and Harry topples into the dirt! OH NO! He'll hurt me! He wants to hurt me, so bad, so bad, so bad, so bad.
Harry restands clumsily and takes off sprinting again. But he runs into something. Himself. OH NO! Harry stands in front of Harry. He can't move. He just stands and looks at himself. What's going on? The Harry image begins to rot before his eyes. Blood squirts from its eyes, nose, mouth, ears, everywhere. Horrendous wounds appear along its skin. Its skin turns a horrible white as the flies come. They swarm all over the rapidly decaying flesh. A few seconds later the flies are gone and maggots are crawling all over the thing's body. The horrible smell returns. It opens its mouth and Harry falls into it. FALLS, FALLS, FALLS!!! Falls into darkness and is gone.
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Harry reawakens on a ledge outside Voldemort's castle. Voldemort is slowly approaching him. What's going on? Harry gives one last effort and drags himself so he can look over the edge of the mountain. The fool on the mountain sees the world going round, and the sun setting below the storm clouds in the distance. A foolish grin crosses his face. Who am I? Nobody seems to like me, they can tell that I'm a fool. I'm not the fool, they're the fools. Harry waits patiently for Voldemort to kill him.
He lets himself soak up the rain. His suffering is horrible. Harry's whole body is nothing but pain. The coldness just makes his agony worse. Goodbye. Why doesn't Voldemort walk faster?
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But WAIT! What about
HERMIONE! RON! NEVILLE! HAGRID! DUMBLEDORE! SIRIUS! LUPIN! MOM! DAD!
A last warmth comes through him. The best one. Harry loves life so much, he loves his friends so much. He won't die! Voldemort stands over Harry's crumpled form. He fires off the Avada Kadavra right between Harry's eyes! But, all his friends' love! his mother's love! Love from a group of people was stronger than just one! Harry's friends had put a spell on him without even their knowledge! Voldemort's spell backfires, and he is lifted into the air surrounded by green light. Harry stands and carries him telepathically through the air over to the cliff to a sheer drop. He holds him there, as Voldemort's arms break, as The Dark Lord's legs break, as You-Know-Who's spine breaks! Voldemort face runs with crimson blood and his body is continually being morphed into increasingly more disturbing shapes. He screams in agony as he pleas for his life! But Harry has no mercy. Voldemort realizes he's finished and laughs and laughs and laughs as blood squirts out of his mouth and lands on Harry. His eyes turn a fiery red as veins pulse on his chest and pop blood. Voldemort vomits everywhere. Green, hideous fluid is jettisoned in the air like a horrible geyser.
The pale man Harry is holding above a cliff suddenly stares at Harry with blood and vomit oozing down his miss-shapen head, and this time he isn't laughing. A smile crosses his face. Is Voldemort happy? He chuckles.
Voldemort suddenly bursts into crimson flames. His now lifeless distorted body hangs in the air for a few seconds and slowly tumbles. It speeds up and then plummets down the cliff. A long trail of blood and fire follows him as he falls, falls, falls down past spiky rocks and huge boulders. This makes him appear to be a gruesome evil comet streaming hideous colors of blood red and fiery yellow. Voldemort's gruesome dead body heads straight for the battle way down below! When it lands, it explodes into a billion pieces. All the dementors fade into dust in the wind.
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Harry stands at the base of the cliff while its pouring down rain looking down the sheer drop Voldemort just got thrown. He is relieved! It is finally all over...
BAM! A body slams into his! Draco gets on top of Harry's crippled body and starts pounding it to pieces as he cries and cries. Harry can't get him off him, he's too weak. Draco weeps and weeps and weeps and punches and punches and punches as Harry is left defenseless. But Harry reaches into Draco's pocket and pulls out his wand. Harry shoots Draco, and Draco flies off him into the ground. Harry stands up and holds the wand toward Draco. Draco screams at Harry to kill him, he has nothing to live for! He screams at Harry for ruining his life! He screams at his dad and mom for not loving him enough! He screams at the world for everything! Draco charges Harry and flings himself at him! Harry sends spells at him but they all miss. Draco lands on Harry, and they both go tumbling off the side of the cliff.
Harry holds on a ledge with two hands and Draco holds on to Harry's foot. They are hanging on over the battle itself, and can hear the horrible war being raged below still. Harry screams at Draco not to commit suicide and let go. Draco, with a tear in his eye, says "Harry, why shouldn't I?". Draco releases his grip from Harry's shoe and falls to his death. Harry holds on as the clouds clear, and a ray of sunshine beats down on his head, warming him. He stays there for a long time.
A voice comes to him. It's the voice of the thing he met in his blackout.
"THANK ALOT! THANKS ALOT HARRY! YOU RUIN EVERYTHING! EVERYTHING! HARRY, EVERYTHING!" the voice screams. "WE JUST WANTED TO HAVE FUN! BUT YOU WOULDN'T LET US, WOULD YOU!? HARRY! DO YOU SEE NOW!!!!!! WE'RE DONE!!!!!"
The voice was gone.
Harry cries. He cries until he finally realizes it's his time to die too and prepares to let go, but Lupin, Hermione, and Neville arrive! Lupin shouts at Harry not to do it, and he stretches his hand towards him and tells him not to let go! But Harry is determined to.
Then Lupin tells Harry a story about his father, mother, and Sirius, and Lupin having a picnic in a park. He tells Harry he was there too, he was only a baby, and how he was so so happy. How his mother and father laughed! How Sirius held Harry in his arms for the first time! How Harry cried when he fell down in the beautifully green grass!
Harry is inspired to grab on, and Neville, Hermione, and Lupin lift him off the cliff as the sun shines even brighter.
All four hug each other at the edge of the cliff. A man observes silently through the castle door. His smile is huge, and his name is Dumbledore.
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Dumbledore all escorts them inside the castle. Harry is on the brink of death so Dumbledore lays him down. Fawkes bursts through a window and cries over Harry.
Harry heals after a few moments while all four wait for him to heal patiently. Lupin and Dumbledore are talking when Fawkes finishes the healing process. He flies threw the window he came from, and Harry races to see him fly into the horizon. "Thanks for everything, Godric, " Harry whispers as he watches the phoenix fly over a far-away mountain.
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When they arrive to the victory bash, Harry's body is healed but not his mind. They take him to a warm bed inside a tent. He sleeps and sleeps and sleeps. When he wakes up, Ron's tearful mother escorts him outside where everyone cheers! Thousands upon thousands of guests cheer Harry! This goes on for several minutes when finally Dumbledore arrives and loudly silences them. Dumbledore gives a speech. At first its cheery, but it gradually grows heart-wrenching, and finally goes to Harry. Dumbledore can only smile. He turns to Harry and bows. So does everyone else. Harry is the only one left standing, and a tear runs down his cheek. Harry wears the biggest smile he's ever had. His scar on his forehead's gone, but a much worse one immerges. One on his heart.
A huge party is held in celebration of Harry. Thousands of people are there including two of biggest party bashers, Fred and George. Lupin never leaves Harry's side.
When it finally dies out, Dumbledore asks to see Harry in his tent. He tells Harry he must be leaving now. Harry asks WHY!? Dumbledore says his purpose is over. Hogwarts was destroyed while he was away along with everyone in it (including Bagman). It's his turn to say goodbye. Harry cries. Dumbledore cries too. He stands up, touches Harry's shoulder and leaves the tent. But Dumbledore does whisper in his ear, "See you soon," and smiles. Harry never sees him again, or knows what happens to him. Harry goes to his tent and cries until midnight. He doesn't know what will happen to him now, or where he'll go.
Harry has a wonderful dream that night. He meets his parents and Sirius and they celebrate. Finally in the dream, Sirius asks Harry something he has been longing to hear again for four years. "Harry, do you want to come live with me."
Harry is relieved and says "Yes."
I put up my story for discussion at:
http://forums.iharrypotter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1290&page=1#pid39323
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