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PART 2
Harry unboards with the mouse and phoenix and journeys through the swamp-ish forest until he reaches a cottage. He knocks on the door, but nobody answers, so he walks around to find an old woman watering her plants. She seems angry at Harry "the intruder," until Harry shows her his scar. She doesn't explain, but she knows he's not a spy.
She calls all her animals and introduces him to them all. Then they go inside the cottage.
It's a wonderful place, full of machines and gremlins working on them. She tells the young wizard she has been waiting for him and says her name is Ravenclaw or Circe the witch! Harry is incredibly surprised and asks her why she still doesn't live off the coast of Italy, but she says it's too dangerous there now, so she lives in England.
Circe then gives Harry a tour around her cottage until she eventually leads Harry to a comfortable little bed. It's made of wood and has a comfortable little hand-made quilt on it. Circe tells him to get in and sleep. Harry immediately does and finds it the most comfortable bed he's ever slept in. Harry is shaken awoke.
Circe tells him they must hurry and she grabs her broom.
They both mount their broomsticks, no questions asked, and they take off. Harry notices it is night. They fly through London with incredibly beautiful lights. In front of all the muggles. The people in the city gather and watch them through their windows and on the streets. Someone fires a rifle at them, but nothing else happens.
When they pass the city and some ways more, they land and make a camp in a concealed spot behind a hill. It's close to the train track, but hidden. They make a camp, and set up tents. She lights a smokeless fire for him, and they eat a delicious dinner. Afterwards, however, she tells him she must be leaving, and tells him no matter what, do not leave the camp on any condition. She leaves.
Harry is lonely again, and is in still very much pain from his booboos from Lucius. The only company he has is mouse Pettigrew and baby Fawkes. Harry sleeps, but has a very restless night with many nightmares. He is glad that he has his two companions with him.

PART 3
When Harry awakes he makes himself breakfast and relaxes until noon. Out of no where, however, Tonks arrives. They hug, and Harry tells her that he was worried about her because she went missing. Tonks says she was fine, it was part of the plan.
She tells Harry that Circe raided the Mudblood railroad station last night, and that he should come back with her because Circe won and the train station is safe. Harry tells her that Circe said to stay at the camp on any condition. Tonks says its fine, and so he goes with her.
When they come into view of the railroad station, it is surrounded by death-eaters. Harry is about to say something when Tonks slams Harry in the back of the head. Tonks severely tells him that she isn't Tonks. Tonks was killed at the train station after she was brutally tortured. She tells him she is Tonks with Polyjuice potion, and at that moment she changes into Bellatrix.
Bellatrix kicks Harry and drags him to the Mudblood railroad station.
She talks to the other death eaters including a cool-looking death-eater with sun glasses named Nikolai.
Apparantly, Circe did raid, but stole away only one captive of theirs, an annoying little house elf who used to belong to Lucius.
After this, Nikolai gets the orders to bring Harry to a Death Camp for mudbloods, squibs, and other traitors. He is loaded on a train after being beaten by Nikolai.
The train takes off. It's not smooth like the train he road to Circe. It's incredibly bumpy. Him and his two companions that hid during the incident, huddle together in the cold of night.
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The next day, he meets someone on the train he didn't expect, Mrs. Figg, a squib. She is horribly sick, but Harry looks after her. After 3 days of continuing north, Mrs. Figg gets so sick that the Death Eaters pick her up, and throw out of the train, killing her. Harry has no one but the rat and the baby phoenix again. He talks to them often and asks why Pettigrew doesn't change back, but of course, they never answer.
When they arrive, it's a horrible building where mudbloods are lined up in front of it. He is lined up with the other prisoners from the mudblood train (at least 100) and some are taken inside, others are led off. Harry is taken inside, but quite a few of his other train members (all of the young ones) were led off.
The building is actually not a building at all, Harry discovers, but a giant fence to keep people in. Inside the giant walls are enormous fields and a few small buildings.
Harry sees all the people working in the fields. They all look incredibly skinny and filthy. He is led into one of the small buildings. Inside is Macnair. Macnair screams at Harry, getting spit everywhere and orders him to be tortured for 7 days.
After his 7 days Harry is incredibly weak and stumbles out onto the field. Someone helps him up. It's incredibly starved looking Hermione, missing all her teeth.
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Harry and Hermoine sleep in the same housing compartment and eat at the same eating area. While they are working out in the fields they talk about their adventures while they were away. Hermione is incredibly interested in Harry's.
Hermione says she was taken away from the school almost immediately after it was raided and taken here.
Harry meets other old friends and enemies there, like the lone Creevy brother, Dennis, and Filch. During his first month there, Filch goes crazy and tries to escape, and is in turned killed immediately by the death eaters.
Every Friday, Harry soon learns, he is supposed to be taken and tortured, and every time he does. During his time, because of this, at the death camp Harry grows incredibly attached to the rat and Fawkes, and they to him.
Also while he is there, he notices sick often captives are being taken off, and never being brought back.
The guards of the place, though, weren't death eaters. They were weird little demon creatures who were creepy and evil to the bone. The demons would whip the captives constantly and if they caught you out at night they would kill you right then and there.
1.5 months in, Harry's torture gets carried to 2 days a week, and 2 months in to 4.
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One day Harry is so ill from his torturing, that he can't stand to be tortured the next day. He falls into a deep sleep. When he wakes up, it's Friday, and he isn't being tortured, but his glasses are missing.
He soon learns that Hermione dressed up as him and took the beating for him, because she felt so sorry for him. Hermione was discovered, and he learns that she is to be tortured for 10 more days then she will be killed. That's where the people are disappearing to, Harry discovers. When they disappear, they are being killed.
He sneaks out the 5th night and meets Hermione. She looks near death. He decides they need to escape, on the next night he plans to rescue Hermione and try to escape.
Except on that morning, Snape meets him and tells him to do nothing, she'll be alright.
Harry doesn't listen because he still hates Snape, and rescues Hermione from the torture house and runs through the field. He is spotted by the death eaters. Harry is taken to see Macnair, and Macnair tells him that he and Hermione will be killed that next morning.
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That next morning as Harry and Hermione are being led to be killed, they talk to each other. Hermione tells Harry "I love you." Fawkes, who was discovered, is taken away, but Harry is still aloud his rat, and Wormtail acts brave for a man who is about to be killed. The two friends are in incredible pain. Harry starts to cry; so does Hermione. They are led into a brick building, down a dark hall full of cobwebs and to a door. The door is made out of stone with one window looking in. The death-eater opens the door and shoves Harry and Hermione in. He shuts the door behind him. Hermione breaks into a coughing fit but Harry revitalizes her. The room they are in is a square blank room with one whole in the top. Harry picks up Hermione and walks with her by his side. They look up at the hole from underneath. Harry hugs Hermione and waits for the inevitable. He now knows they will be poisoned to death. Harry says goodbye to Hermione for the last time.
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Hagrid breaks in the room! He grabs them and pulls them to safety, and beats up the death eaters who try to stop him. Hagrid tells them The Order has arrived and will be saving them. The half-giant runs with them outside, holding them in his arms, and they see many duels going on. Harry and Hermione see Snape, Kingsley, Arthur Weasley, and a whole bunch of others fighting. Nikolai, Lucius, Macnair, Bellatrix, and other Death Eaters are there too. It is pouring down rain, and it is hard to see, but Harry and Hermione can see the light from spell blasts flying around. Hagrid tells Harry and Hermione to run into the cafeteria and he puts them down. They do and flop through the mud and the pouring rain. There are others in there too, including Creevy. They watch the duels through the windows that are water-intolerant, who now Hagrid is participating in to a deadly affect.
The Order look like they are about to win when the most horrible thing happens. Voldemort arrives. The rain starts to clear, and The Order try to attack, but they are now in the losing.
Just then, adult Crabbe and Goyle run in the cafeteria and start blasting the place apart. Many die, but Harry, Hermione, and the rat with them, hide. Kingsley runs in after Crabbe and Goyle, and tells everyone to get out.
The 3 do, but the cafeteria crashes behind them, killing everyone inside. Harry, Hermione, with the rat with them, avoid the duel-blasts and the still present demons with the whips. Harry sprains his ankle and falls in the mud with Hermione. Hermione can't get up either, because she is still too weak to get up by herself.
They stay there for a while until it's quiet.
Harry hears someone approaching. It's Voldemort dangling Snape in the air. The duelings are over, the death-eaters won. Voldemort is the last man standing. The rain has completely stopped, but there is still thunder and lighting.
Voldemort thrusts Snape's attention to the two children and screams, "THIS IS WHAT YOU ARE FIGHTING FOR?! HAHAHAHA! YOU HAVE SACRIFICED YOUR LIFE FOR NOTHING SNAPE!"
He throws Snape at the two children. Snape, with his final energy, yells back, "FOR ALL YOUR CUNNING VOLDEMORT, YOU STILL HAVE NO CHANCE AGAINST DUMBLEDORE!!!"
Voldemort whispers to Snape, but they still hear him, "Dumbledore is dead!"
Snape faints. Voldemort looks more cruel than Harry has ever seen him. Hermione is shivering and crying beside him.
Voldemort looks more formal again, and starts talking to Harry about how he gets to finally kill him fare and square. He talks about how The Great Harry Potter has finally failed. Voldemort gives one final bow to Harry and lifts his wand. But something happens, Wormtail appears. He tells Voldemort to not kill Harry, or else. Voldemort laughs and lifts Wormtail with his wand. He tells him how stupid he is and uses the Crucio curse on him. While this is going on, Harry shouts out for Voldemort to stop, this makes Voldemort just laugh more obnoxiously. Finally Voldemort throws Wormtail against one of the buildings using a spell with his wand. Wormtail looks crippled, and Harry sees blood dribble down from his mouth.
Voldemort raises his wand for the final killing curse against Harry, Harry stands firm, and pledges to die like his father, a man! He prepares to take his death except Hermione, finding energy somewhere stands up and shouts "You'll have to kill me first!"
Voldemort says, "My pleasure, my dear," with a ghastly smile and fires off the killing curse.
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But then Dumbledore arrives!!!!
He charges forward and meets Voldemort's blast and sends it back at him. Voldemort dodges it.
Harry cries in happiness. Dumbledore and Voldemort battle. It is an amazing battle, reminiscent of Yoda's and Dooku's light-saber duel. Rocks, mud, and buildings fly everywhere as projectiles in the battle. Hermione falls back down in the mud next to Harry and the unconscious Snape. When Dumbledore finally gets pinned, Voldemort whispers something in his ear. Just when it appears Voldemort is about to finish Dumbledore, Hagrid comes charging forward to save him. Voldemort kills Hagrid with a blast, but Dumbledore escapes because of Voldemort's diverted attention.
Harry has never seen Dumbledore with this power of glow before! Dumbledore beats the crap out of Voldemort. Voldemort shivers on his knees in front of Dumbledore and continues to back up while Dumbledore moves forward.
But Voldemort stands up again as Lucius, Nikolai, Bellatrix, and hundreds of the dark little demons with whips arrive behind him. They encircle the four survivors.
Voldemort laughs! Harry hugs Hermione. Dumbledore screams at all of the evil beings around him. He backs up and picks up Harry and Hermione and shouts out "CIRCE!!!"
Voldemort takes a step back, and at this moment Harry hears a familiar voice shout out from behind him "YOU SHALL NOT HURT HARRY POTTER!!!!!!!!!!!" And at this moment Circe, with an army of house elves led by Dobby, charge forward toward them. Voldemort, and the death-eaters teleport. The house elves distinguish the demons (kill them) and it's all over.
Harry and Hermione run to the lifeless form of Hagrid and cry and cry and cry.
Dumbledore walks over and tells them about death and picks both of them up.
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Harry and Hermione arrive back at Hogwarts, guarded by a number of house elves. Harry enters extreme depression, while Hermione spends weeks in the hospital division. Only Ron keeps him company. He has been ill too ever since Lucius began poisoning him. One morning, after a particularly bad night of weeping, Harry tries to leave Hogwarts without anyone's permission. It's a bizarre June, because it is snowing heavily. He heads to the Forbidden Woods, and he plans to journey up to the mountain, and to who knows where. He thinks if he is captured by Centaurs and killed and mutilated, so be it. McGonagall, Ron, and Hermione who discover he's missing, can't stop him, and he continues to walk forward toward the woods. Harry reaches the edge of the woods, however, at this moment, Hedwig lands on his shoulder. He stops for quite awhile and pets Hedwig and realizes his little owl loves him. He turns around, crying into his sleeve, and walks back to the warmth of Hogwarts protection. A week later, he returns to the Dursleys'.
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During Harry's adventure, Fudge took over many European countries with his flame monsters, having little resistance and none on British soil. The Ministry is just reaching the climax of its power at the end of the book with Voltemort and his allies still extremely powerful.

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