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Stories in production
Merton Dingle Love Machine
Demon In The Slow Lane
Nature Is Bad
CRUD revised ending
Freaky Wednesday Page 1
Freaky Wednesday Page 2
Vision Girl Page 1
Vision Girl Page 2
7 Unfinished PLEASE HELP
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| EXT: Pleasantville, Night Quick shots of the van turning corners and the hearse turning into a driveway. INT: The Lair Merton walks into the Lair and picks up the crossbow and arrows on the desk. Voice from off screen: Hello. Merton jumps up in shock and drops the contents he is holding. The camera turns to see one of those bald guys with dark glasses. Bald Guy: Sorry, I didn’t mean to startle you. Merton picks up the crossbow and aims it at the intruder. Merton: Who are you? Bald Guy: My name is Tamin and I am looking for Lori Baxter. Merton: What do you want with Lori. Tamin: I am here on behalf of a group of people with a similar gift. Merton: Gift? He tightens his grip on the crossbow as Tamin pulls off his sunglasses and reveals that he has the same all white eyes. Tamin: We were alerted of another messenger, this Lori Baxter, and we came to your town to find her. Merton: Can you help her? Tamin: Help her? Merton: Yeah, we killed the demon but it didn’t go away. Tamin: We have no intention of taking it away, it is the best thing that can happen to someone. We came here to take her to our compound so she can learn about her powers. Merton: She doesn’t want to learn about them, she wants them gone. Tamin: What makes you so sure she does? (pause) Tamin: Tell her about us, tell her about our offer, and tell her that if she makes up her mind, to contact us at this number. He gives Merton a card and then touches his head with his index finger. Tamin: You better go. Merton: Why. Tamin: Your friends are about to get into some trouble. INT:??? Close up on a set of sharp yellow teeth surrounded by purple skin, it licks its lips. INT: Graveyard, Night Camera pans out to see it is a three-eyed demon smiling. A body is lying on the ground behind him. Demon: Mmm, must have been an honor student. The gang (minus Merton) along with Darien, Bobby, and Claire walk through the entrance into graveyard. Merton runs up behind them holding the weapons. Merton: It’s all right I’m here. The demon turns to them. Tommy: Hi. Thought Eater: Who are you? Merton: Think of us as the Pleasantville equivalent to the Ghostbusters, taking down any supernatural phenomena that threatens our little hamlet. Tommy: Aren’t you being a tad over-dramatic? Merton: Don’t start with me Tommy. Claire: That thing is amazing. Allison: Yeah that sense of wonder, you get over that. Tommy: We’re here to politely ask you to stop eating people’s thoughts. Thought Eater: And if I refuse? Tommy: Oh, then we kick your ass. The Thought Eater stands up straight, revealing that he is close to eight feet tall. Merton: Yeah this is doable. It riles up and roars, showing it’s sharp teeth and third eye. Merton: Okay. Allison: Tommy, are you gonna…? Tommy: Yeah. Could somebody…? Merton: Sure. Merton swings his fist to the side, punching Tommy in the stomach. He goes down and then gets back up, wolfed out. Tommy: Thanks. He walks up to the demon and puts up his fists. Tommy: Let’s do this. Back to the group. Darien: What can we do? Merton: Nothing. He has it all under control. Tommy is thrown across the graveyard and lands face down at their feet. Merton: Or not. Darien backs up into the shadows. The demon charges at them. Allison: Merton, the crossbow. Merton: Oh yeah. He lifts up the crossbow and shoots it. The arrow lands right into the demons stomach causing him to fall backwards. It starts to get up. Bobby: What do you do now. Merton: Now, Tommy can easily take him down. He looks at Tommy, still unconscious on the ground. Merton: Oh right. I think we run now. The Thought Eater stands back up and pulls the arrow out of his stomach. EXT: Outside Street of Graveyard, Night A black car pulls up and four people dressed in all black stealth suits jump out. INT: Graveyard, Night The group is scattered around the Graveyard, losing the battle. Claire: I don’t get it, you’ve shot that thing dozens of times and it just gets back up. Merton: Its psychic power heals any minor injury. Bobby is leaning over Tommy. Bobby: Come on buddy, wake up, you’ve still gotta job to do. EXT: Beach (Tommy’s Dream) Tommy and a super model are running playfully down the beach. Tommy trips and falls on his back. The girl drops down on top of him. Close up on her face as it fades into… INT: Graveyard, Night …Bobby’s. Bobby: Wake up. Tommy leans up and pouts his lips to kiss what he thinks is the girl, he opens his eyes just before he does and backs up immediately. Tommy (Grossed Out): Hey man, what’s up? Bobby: Uh, demon, over there. Tommy: Right. He gets up, then turns back around. Tommy: Let us never speak of that, ever. Bobby: Speak of what? Tommy: Good. He walks off screen. The demon charges Lori and picks her up. She winces and then starts to laugh. Thought Eater: What are you laughing at? Lori: A tree branch about this long. Thought Eater: Huh? Tommy swings a long tree branch at the back of his head and he goes down, dropping Lori to the ground. Tommy: Funny, I just killed this demon yet I can’t think of anything witty to say. Allison: I think any witty retort would be lost on us due to the recent shock. Tommy: I guess. Bobby: Okay, can we get out of here please? Merton: What’s the matter, afraid he might get up? The demon gets up and shoots a beam at Bobby. He is pushed out of the way by an unseen force. A gun appears out of thin air and shoots the demon in the head. Darien appears holding the gun, shedding silver flakes (see the show to watch this happen). Bobby: Thanks Fawkes. (pause) Allison: That was so cool. Merton: We should get out of here. Claire: What do you do with the body? Tommy: What do you mean? Claire: The dead demon body on the ground. Tommy: Nothing. Claire: Won’t somebody find it? They shrug. Claire: I give up, let’s just go. EXT: Graveyard, Night The group walks out of the graveyard, Lori lagging behind. Merton: Oh wait, Lori, I forgot to tell you… The all black guys jump out of the bushes and grab Lori. Tommy: Lori! One of the guys shots his rifle at Tommy, sending an electric bolt through his body. He wolfs out and falls down just as the throw Lori into their car. Merton: What the hell? Phone Conversation Tamin: Hello? Lori? Tommy: No, this is Tommy. What have you done with her? Tamin: What do you mean? Tommy: Some of your goons kidnapped Lori. Tamin: We would never want to kidnap her, as I told your friend, it is her choice. Tommy: Somehow I just can’t belief you. Tamin: Maybe you should ask some of your new acquaintances. Tommy: Huh? (click) INT: The Lair A hairy hand slams the phone down; the group is sitting around the Lair looking hopeless. Merton: What did he say? Tommy: He said they didn’t have her. Merton: This guy was really weird, I wouldn’t put it past them to take her away. (pause) Allison (at the computer): Hey guys, I think I’ve got something. They rush over to the computer. Allison: I put in the license plate number into the search engine, it’s a government number. Merton: Government number? Tommy: Did you have anything to do with this? Darien: No Bobby looks around suspiciously again. Darien: Bobby, did you send those guys after her? Bobby: What? No way! Claire: Bobby? Bobby: Okay fine, I called ‘em. Tommy picks him up and slams him into the wall. Tommy: Why? Bobby: I don’t know, I guess I was afraid! Tommy: Afraid? Bobby: I was afraid of you. They were supposed to take you, not Lori. Tommy: You didn’t have to be afraid of me. He pushes him harder into the wall. Tommy: Until now! Darien: Hold up, he didn’t know what he was doing. Bobby: I tried to call it off but they wouldn’t listen. Tommy drops him to his feet. Darien: Its all right man. Darien punches him, hard in the face. Tommy picks him up and shoves him into the wall. Tommy: Where is she? Bobby: I don’t know. Tommy drops him. Allison: If their government, they’re probably at the government facility outside of town. Claire: That’s kind of convenient. Allison: Well where else would she be? Merton: Let’s go. Tommy: No I want to do this on my own. Darien: I’m coming with you. Tommy: No. Darien: I can get you through. Tommy: Fine. Darien: We’ll take the van. Bobby: Can I come? D and T: No! Tommy and Darien leave via the stairs. INT: Operating Room A bright light shines direct and is moved away to show two doctors looking down at Lori. Doctor 1: Pupils appear to be…gone. Doctor 2: That’s pretty much a given, doctor. Doctor 1: Well, let’s get to it. Doctor 2 pushes a laser-like device into view. EXT: Facility, Night The van pulls up in front of a military facility. Tommy and Darien get out of the car and walk up to the door. Tommy: Well? Darien: Well what? Tommy: You said you could get through, so open the door. Darien: I turn invisible, I don’t walk through walls. Tommy: You’re useless. Darien: Think of it this way, I could go around and sneak into the back, come through, and open the door, but by then that girl will be dissected two times over. (pause) Darien: Just break it down. INT: Facility Lobby The door breaks down after Tommy kicks it; they walk through. Tommy: Hmm, no guards. Darien: Let’s go. INT: Facility Hallway Tommy and Darien are walking down the hall. Darien: Maybe this isn’t the right place. Tommy: It’s the only shot we’ve got. A guard turns the corner at the end of the hall. Darien: Watch out. He pulls Tommy into the nearest door. INT: Room Darien and Tommy are sitting in the room waiting for the guard to pass. Darien: Okay I think he’s gone. Tommy notices something on the computer in the corner. Darien: What? He moves up to read the text on the screen over Tommy’s shoulder. Darien: “Patterns of Lycanthropic Behavior”? Tommy: It’s about me, well werewolves at least. Darien: All your weaknesses, like someone’s trying to take you down. There’s a knock at the door. Voice: Uh, Dr. Croft? They exchange nervous glances. Voice: You there? Tommy (In Mock-Falsetto Voice): I’m sorry I can’t be disturbed right now. Darien mouths “What are you doing?” and Tommy shrugs. Voice: Oh, I just came by to pick up that disk for the guys in 318. Tommy: Oh… He pulls an unmarked disk from the computer desk and slips it under the door. Tommy: Here ya go. INT: Hallway The disk slips through the bottom of the door and the guard picks it up. INT: Room Voice: Thanks man. They here footsteps as the guard leaves. Darien: How the hell did that work? Tommy: You’d be surprised with what you can get away with in this town. He opens the door and looks both ways. Tommy: Okay, I think the coast is clear. INT: Hallway Tommy walks out into the hallway and a gun is shoved in his face. Guard: You actually thought I believed you? Tommy: I though maybe you were stupid. Guard: Ya know I was gonna take to the office so they could decide what to do with you but I might just waste you right now. His head goes down and then he falls to the ground in front of Tommy. Darien becomes visible, holding a hard plastic binder. Tommy: I take it back, you are useful for something. INT: Different Hallway They stand in front of a door marked 318. Darien: You think this is right? Tommy: There’s always a chance. INT: Operating Room The door burst open and they enter to see the two doctors operating the laser on Lori. Darien: Did I ever tell you how cool that is? Tommy: Lori! He runs up to the operating table and takes off her straps. Tommy: Are you all right? Doctor 1: What are you doing here? He turns to the doctor and starts to back him into a wall. Tommy: Were gonna take her home now, and you’re not gonna do anything about it. The doctor hits the wall and shakily pulls out a cross necklace. Tommy swats his hand away and punches him in the head, causing him to fall down. The other doctor tries to run out of the door but Darien stops him with his hand and punches him, causing him to fall as well. Lori gets up. Darien: you all right? Lori: Yeah I’m fine. Darien: Well that guard’s gonna get up soon so we better get out of here. INT: The Lair The gang is sitting in the Lair, relieved that Lori is back. (Tommy’s Inner Monologue) Okay, everything is good: all demons are vanquished, and all government interference is gone, there’s only one more thing to take care of. INT: Tommy’s House, Kitchen Tommy and Lori are talking. Lori: So, Merton told me about the others, the ones with the visions. Tommy: So… Lori: I’m going with them. Tommy: Oh. Lori: I want to learn more about them, and their the only way to do that. (pause) Lori: You gonna be all right? Tommy: Yeah, just promise me one thing. Lori: What? Tommy: Don’t shave your head. She laughs and pulls him into a hug. After a second or two she lets go and walks out of the archway into the living room, she turns around before she leaves. Lori: Uh, Tommy? Tommy: Yeah? Lori: Could you take a few steps to your left. He obeys and a small remote-control car drives past Tommy’s feet, where he was standing, and goes into the living room, it has a sandwich on a plate on top of it. INT: Living Room The car drives in front of Dean’s chair and he picks up the sandwich. INT: Kitchen Lori: Bye Tommy. Tommy: Bye. She leaves. (TIM) Well, I guess everything is good and wrapped up. INT: Graveyard Mausaleum A scrool placed on top of two others, the camera moves up and shows Evil Merton grinning maniacally. |
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